Before i moved to de US, i had never played xbox online. I had heard about it and i had seen commercials on tv. Despite all those Advertisements, i had never had the opportunity to play xbox online because the internet was so expensive at that time in Mexico.
In contrast, in the US, the internet is so popular and necesary for the people who live there. When i moved to the US, i was able to pay for the internet and i bought a laptop and an xbox 360.
As soon is i got my xbox, i connected it to the internet and i started a great adventure by playing xbox online. Is unbeliavable how many people are connected to the internet to play xbox online. There you can play and chat with people from different countries worldwide.
That's so magic and amazing to have such a great experience when you are conected to the internet. There is nothing you can not do. Now i see that there is nothing imposible in this life.
I consider that this was my best piece of writing because in this writing i explain and compare the big differeces between Mexico and the US. This was the use of internet in both countries and the advances of technology to let me play xbox online.
ReplyDeleteThe use of internet have been playing an important role in life. First of all because when i was in Mexico i was very interested in touch a computer to play just games. Then i realize that when i was of the computer i could make a lot of big things that could help me to improve my knowledge.
In this piece of writing i also noticed that my grammar wasn't bad at all, that means that im improving a lot because if i go back to the writings i had made before, i know that i would find many errors.
I think if i compare this writing to the essay i did called "My life is easy with apps"on this one i would find some more mistakes such as run ons, articles problems and not good connections between the paragraphs.
Probably i will be making some mistakes in my future writings but i know that i can improve that to make it better.