Christian
Flores
May 28th
2013
My teenage vs. my adult self
This
is a really good topic to bring back my teenage, and compare to my adult life
that I live now day. I remember that when I was teenager, I used I used to
complain for everything, but now I’m more serious, and reasonable. I remember
once that my dad order me to go to the field to get the cows home. I was so angry
because I was watching the thunder cats, my favorite cartoon.
A
lot of things happen when we are teenager. Wow like it was yesterday, whereas I
use to like to watch cartoons as a teenager, now I prefer to watch movies, news
or other important programs. While I now enjoy watching news, I used to hate it
as a teenager.
Being
a teenager is a completely dramatic story for some of us, most of the time we aren’t
agree with anybody specially our parents, but at the same time, as a teenager, I
used to receive everything from my parents. In contrast, now I buy my own
things, and I help them out.
Through
I was growing up, my mind and my body was having changes. There is a moment
that, my teenager is converted in a mature and reasonable person. Unlike my
teenager self, I’m now quite, hard worker and selfless. I work for my parents and
brothers. I’m an adult, and I will always be there when they need me.
i really like this piece of writing because you serve with your pass to have a better future.
ReplyDelete1- I consider that this is my best piece of writing in this semester, because It reminds me my childhood, and how I have been change into my adult self.
ReplyDelete2-I had learned that when I am going to start a essay or a piece of writing, i have to let a space in the first line, and also when I am going to start a new paragraph. I also have learned to capitalize "I" that was one of the mistakes that I always did,and also I learned how to use fan-boys, I didn't have any idea about it.
3- I chose this piece of writing, because is short and clear also I considerate that the punctuation marks are correct.
* I consider that this piece if writing is better than the first essay "Technology".This essay was really bad created. The paragraph didn't have any relations with each other. The punctuation marks were on the wrong place, and was very confusing to my teacher to read.
I'm happy to read what happened when you was a teenage. You share with us what kind of person you was and now you get improvement in your personality. That is better for you because sometimes there is some people who don't want to leave their childhood, they think they're still a baby. With that writing, you used the clear paragraph to let us follow your ideas.
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