The Good and Bad Doctor
in My Life
Most doctors believe that being a doctor
needs a lot of good qualities, such as competence, responsibility and
professionalism. However, some others
ignore that. While good doctors are
responsible and competent, bad ones are careless, incompetent and even impatient.
I remember one day, I got sick. I had a terrible headache pain almost every
day. I coughed and coughed all the
time. When my parents noticed that I
coughed too much, they decided to bring me to the hospital. Arriving at the hospital, I told the doctor I
thought it was a cold. The doctor, J. Franklin, worked at St. Louis Hospital in
Haiti as the main doctor. At this
moment, I felt so bad. I felt my body’s
temperature increased and was more than it would normally be. My whole body was
so hot.
After a few minutes, the doctor
impatiently tried to give me something to drink. I took the medicine he ordered me and drank
it. When I finished drinking the
medicine, I felt uneasy. I couldn’t really know what happened to me because I
felt confused, bored and even dizzy. I
couldn’t clearly identify anybody. That was the worst moment in my life. It was then that the doctor said to my
parents, “He is going to be fine. That was my mistake. I apologize, right…”
“Doctor, what happened?” replied my
parents. The doctor said that he realized that he was supposed to take my
body’s temperature first in order to determine the level of temperature and
what it was exactly. The situation was
deplorable. Eventually, the doctor noticed the medicine he gave me was not
appropriate for my illness, so it affected my mind.
The next day, my parents asked the
main doctor who was in charge to send me to another hospital named St. Anthony
Hospital where I found a very nice doctor to treat me. Unlike Dr. Franklin, he
was friendly, competent, careful and patient. His name was Yves Davermann. He
knew what had to do. The first thing he did was he asked me how I felt. He
quickly prescribed me some ibuprofen for relieving my headache pain and made me
do some tests. He explained, “This test is very important. It helps me to determine exactly what you
have and how you could feel”. He also
asked me when and where I did my last check-ups. Then, he took my body’s
temperature and a small amount of blood from my arm. Some minutes later, he told
me that it was flu. “You don’t have to
worry about it. You will recover in a short time, right” he kept explaining.
After that, the doctor prescribed me
some medicines like aspirin, chloroquine and vitamins C to take twice or three
times a day. I followed exactly as the doctor ordered me and then, one week
after, I was cured. I was on the mend. I felt like someone that nothing had
happened. I felt healthy and was back on my feet. That’s why I notice that all
the doctors don’t believe in the same way that being doctor requires a lot of
good qualities. For me, to be a good doctor, you must be competent,
responsible, careful and patient. In
contrast, bad ones are impatient, careless, impatient and unprofessional.
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