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Live Miriella F.A. Choute

March 12, 2013

Essay # 1, Draft # 2

Chicken Pox the Terrible Disease

            Because chicken pox is contagious disease , I had contaminated from my neighbor .I didn't know until my  mother had seen something strange in my body,I was under the weather Since I began to have these symptoms, I felt my life turnover. Every day, I had to take the shower early because of temperature I felt so terrible. Each time I looked my body I saw the rated patches had become bigger than before they were all over my body. I decided to never go out and touch something or someone.

            One day, my friends had visited me, I looked so horrible, and they took me out for fun. I regretted that day a lot. Everything began worse; I had itchy bumps all that night. They had begun so big my head couldn’t lie on my pillow even it was soft. I was in pain all over my body; I had headache and high fever. The day after ,my mother wasn’t at home when I saw her I felt happy because I knew she will be helped me .That day ,I felt weak like I lacked  power. Luckily I was she took me to the clinic. The doctor gave some antibiotics and vaccinate.

            Even though I had taken all medicines, I felt feverish and weak. It was so hard I couldn’t wash and brush my air easily. I did take more than one month for my complete retaliation. But I still had dark spat on my body. I had felt so embarrassed when I went out.

            Afterward, I will never forget that experience. I knew how somebody might fell when he had the hardest one. Because if you had never been sick before you wouldn’t be able to understand someone. I think the worst thing you can have in the world it is illness after that everything is fine because you are healthy.