Terrible Flu
Last month, I came down with in bad flu. It was the worst one that I have had during all my life .I cannot forget this terrible experience since I had very hard symptoms..
Fever was the worst part of my worst experience .I had it for around four days; a medication that I took did not help me so much because it reduced my temperature for one to two hours only, so I should tolerate it until next dosage. I put cold tissues on my forehead to help me feel better, but it did not.
That fever came to me with her best friend .It was intolerable head ach which threw me in my bed without any energy. I felt like my head as heavy as a rock, and felt it dizzy like I was swinging in the playground. If you saw me at this time you can easily recognize a dark circles around my eyes which disappeared slowly after one week.
Both those symptoms gave me a bad feeling of exhaustion .I could not walk more than one meter, and I got a severe pain in my muscles .lost my appetite made my situation too bad since my body had a very poor nutritious fuels. Even though my doctor recommended lots of fluids, I could not take lots of it since I had a vomit too.
I rested around four days, after that I started to feel better, but it was not fully recover. My fever was gone first then my headache started to go slowly, but it took me few more days to gain my energy again .I hope that nobody experiences that bad flu. Right now I am totally healthy and I feel on top of the world.
Hi Abir,
ReplyDeleteI hope that I never get that flu, too! Did you get a flu shot this year? Do you think that you will in the future?
I love the variety of metaphors in this piece. Be careful with the wording of a few of them. Instead of "I felt me head..." in paragraph 3, write it "My head felt as heavy as..."
I also had a question about the meaning of two words in your introduction: expectable and syndromes. I think that you mean "symptoms" for the second one, but I'm not sure what you mean by "expectable." Did you expect to get the flu?
Once you clarify these parts, this will be in good shape!