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Live Miriella F.A. Choute
April 03, 2013
Essay #2
How to use Technology

The new generation believes in Technology. Since they become abducted to it as an example they prefer using the computer than the book. The parents are wondering, what will happen next? Therefore, they try to advise them about technology because the protection of your children is extremely more important than everything. As a result, Parents provide some debates with their children to analyze it deeply showing the negative and positive effect in our life style.

First of all, in my experience, I see a lot of people practice Facebook and twitter for every details.  Even though you have your own password, it   doesn’t say they cannot control you. I think one of the criteria is to put everybody under their power.  In addition, I know there is smart person who try to get some important information from your email. We expose our life without intention. Since I begin to use a computer my eyes hurt me more than before. For me it is more important using a book or paper before a computer. We are innocent as a lamb because life is a mere dream, a feeling shadow on a cloudy day.

In contrast, we use it for research and shopping. Consequently, some information are not correct that’s why some parents and teacher prefer the old fashion such as reading books and paper dictionary. My experience at BMCC shows me the result. For example, my teacher prefers we read the word, have a first impression, and talk about it. I realize it is better before I do my own research; I understand and remember it easily. I can consider the technology and the old fashion are like two peas in a pod.

As a result, we have to communicate in our family by making the technology in the correct place. Since it is working faster, our children will have the same behavior like it. As a parent, you can provide these effects for them, the plan must be a rock solid and so your aims.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Miriella,

    I really appreciate how hard you worked on this essay. It's a very interesting topic -- parents do need to give their children advice about how to use the Internet carefully. This essay is written in a very general style, and I was wondering what your personal experiences were with the topic. There are many different ideas in here, and it is almost too much for the reader to be able to follow. Be careful. We don't want our essays to just be long lists of different ideas. We really want to see development through actual stories and examples. Could you simplify this essay by reducing the number of ideas and trying to develop just one or two very deeply? For example, I don't know what you mean when you say, "as a parent, you have the right to make their children in the correct way by practicing the technology and the old fashion because they are like two peas in a pod." I'm not exactly sure what this means. Let's talk more about this on Tuesday.

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