Frisly
Estime
April
3, 2013
Essay
#2
Internet, My Favorite App For
Furthering My Education
So
many years ago, Computers were considered like a big and large device issued to
make everything possible and so with more ease.
We could even say that’s the most interesting and useful invention in
the world. Few years later, through computer, they invented Internet which is application
software very important to make computers more efficient and also become the
most powerful application that would be throughout the world. It makes the
world reduce in a small group of people.
Today,
the Internet is used by more than 50% people throughout the world. The Internet helps me a lot. When I need to get information about
something unknown, I usually use the Internet.
Because of this software, I don’t have to go to the library and spend all
my time reading books to find information.
Besides, the Internet let you know all that take place in the world like
news, current events, biographies, inventions, great discoveries especially all
having relation with the man, the science, etc…
The Internet is really an application invented for all people in the
world to get closer more easily. It makes us know any topics and with a lot of
details.-
According
to the story, we could spend so much time to learn something. We had to go
school, sat on the class, listened the professor and the professor gave you a
lot of homework to do. Nowadays, the
task is easier because I don’t need to go to school to learn or teach anything.
Other interesting things that the Internet allows us to do is that you can buy,
sell, receive and transfer money to everywhere on the earth, pay bills… With the
Internet, the communication seems the most faster and efficient.
Summarily,
the Internet is the larger and indispensable application into a computer that
people could do allowing us to supplement our knowledge. That’s why I said “The Internet is my favorite application for furthering my education”. Because of all these details, I wish people
who would like to use the Internet like their favorite application for furthering
for their education, use it in its best way and then, they will notice how it
has benefited for their knowledge.
Hi Frisly,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great topic, but please take out anything in this essay that it not directly related to how the Internet has helped further your education (for example, the information about shopping). I would also recommend finding a better attention-focusser -- bring up the idea of connectivity, not size at the beginning of your essay. And please really push yourself to tell a VERY detailed story about how you used the Internet to further your education. For example, did you use it when we did our disease presentations? Be very specific about what you looked up, how you did your research, etc.