Supatcha Punjasamud
March 26, 2013
Essay #2 Drafts #1
Smart
Google
Have
you ever heard the word “Globalizations?” In the present, when you would like
to seek about new information, whatever you can fine it from internet.
Many people who love to surf the internet I believe that nobody doesn’t know
Google. It is website to service searching
information on internet which I can get the most benefit for my education. Thus,
I would like to explain you that why Google has benefit with my learning?
First
of all, you should know that Google can divide 3 categories by its ability as
follow. A: Google Web Search Features (Search Engines) this service that I
always use the Book Search that it help me find my favorite book. New Headline
is searching latest news from around the word so I can receive new news quickly.
B: Google service is application to help your life easier. For example, Alerts
is service that reminds me to new information via e-mail. This program is very
useful because I got importance assignment immediately from teacher. C: Google
Tools are designed to help you for looking the article or something such as
program translation. It helps me make sure correct the words or sentence.
However, when you will find
information should consider key word. If you have an affective key word you
will get answer faster. In my opinion,
I thing Google Suggest will help more convenience in finding the target. This
program is function to suggest “key word” which relate to information you are
searching.
In contrast, Google couldn’t solve
every problem in your life so you should analyze and apply the answer that you
get from Google. Another way I can be able to do for seeking
information is finding it from books. Sometimes Google made me lazy and weak
because I spent time in front of computer almost day. You should manage the
time to balance your life and your heath.
Sai,
ReplyDeleteThis is an extremely organized essay! Remember, though, that the contest asks us to write detailed, personal stories instead of big, broad, general statements. I think that you can eliminate body paragraphs 2 & 3 and replace them with a detailed, true story about how you use Google in relation to your education. For example, we are using it right now through this class blog! I think that this will make your essay stronger and more original.